Jordan R.

February 4, 2012
By nathanielmcd BRONZE, Punta Gorda, Florida
nathanielmcd BRONZE, Punta Gorda, Florida
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Enraptured by your eyes
Those smooth pools of polished bronze
Reflecting the fire of the burning sun
Your hair is like water
Flowing down from a mountain stream,
An unbroken thing of beauty
Your neck is a strong tower
Upon which sits a treasure
More valuable than that of a thousand kingdoms
Your lips are as a ribbon of crimson
Your mouth, it is lovely
Your cheeks are like two halves of a broken pomegranate,
Round and radiant with beauty
Your nose is that of nobility
Ridiculed for its rarity
Your beautiful skin is a walnut,
Perfect and unblemished
Equal in shade and color
Until the appointed time I will pray and long for you my beloved

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I really liked this beautiful young woman of God and since then I have surrendered the possible relationship to the will of God and let it rest unless it is awakened later in my life .

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