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February 4, 2012
By lil.awol ELITE, Independence, Missouri
lil.awol ELITE, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"there's a darkness upon me that's flooded in light, and i'm frightened by those that don't see it" ~the avett brothers, head full of doubt


I discovered I am tired of the sadness
tired of only speaking of bad things
I'm tired of all the cop shows filled with violence and tragedy
I'm tired of the news about the missing baby that has never been found
I want to hear of something good
want to feel joy
see sunny days
but I continue to wear black because its the only color that looks good on me
I continue to write the way I do because its the only way I know how
And keep watching those cop shows because they're the only thing on



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lil.awol ELITE said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 10:32 pm
lil.awol ELITE, Independence, Missouri
124 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there's a darkness upon me that's flooded in light, and i'm frightened by those that don't see it" ~the avett brothers, head full of doubt

Thanks :) yeah I noticed u commented on another peice too, its great to actually get feedback!

on Feb. 20 2012 at 9:55 am
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

great job!! i know a lot of people who only write sad things because that's all they know how to write. They gave reasons similar to the ones in your poem. lov your work ps. please read rate and comment on my work!!




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