The sun went through the shade,
Like sand through a hand.
The birds chirped,
Like a child’s laugher.
Dew glimmered on the grass,
Like tears of joy on a mothers face.
The world awoke,
Like morning came.
Morning came
The sun went through the shade,
Like sand through a hand.
The birds chirped,
Like a child’s laugher.
Dew glimmered on the grass,
Like tears of joy on a mothers face.
The world awoke,
Like morning came.
Writer_JordanGood use of similes in the work. Just make sure you include the apostraphe in "mothers"--"mother's". Also, laughter
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