Morning came

February 6, 2012
By Ekf07 GOLD, Huntersville, North Carolina
Ekf07 GOLD, Huntersville, North Carolina
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“The expert at anything was once a beginner.All writers are crazy. So never mind what the editors, your family and your critique group tells you. Submit your manuscripts and keep submitting until you get an offer. Then you can be crazy, with a payc


The sun went through the shade,
Like sand through a hand.

The birds chirped,
Like a child’s laugher.

Dew glimmered on the grass,
Like tears of joy on a mothers face.

The world awoke,
Like morning came.



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on Feb. 22 2012 at 6:55 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

Good use of similes in the work. Just make sure you include the apostraphe in "mothers"--"mother's". Also, laughter




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