Morning came

February 6, 2012
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The sun went through the shade,
Like sand through a hand.

The birds chirped,
Like a child’s laugher.

Dew glimmered on the grass,
Like tears of joy on a mothers face.

The world awoke,
Like morning came.

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Writer_Jordan said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:55 pm
Good use of similes in the work. Just make sure you include the apostraphe in "mothers"--"mother's". Also, laughter
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