One Last Moment

January 22, 2012
By ThroughTheseEyes GOLD, Oconomowoc, Wisconsin
ThroughTheseEyes GOLD, Oconomowoc, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and i would rather be absolutely ridiculous, then absolutely boring"


Just one.
That's all I'm asking for.
One last moment,
before you're gone forever.
Because everybody has had their time to say goodbye.
Before I've even had the chance to say hello.


The author's comments:
Dedicated to Logan Wilson. RIP <3

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butterfly123 said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 7:16 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! amazing poem. it is short but sweet and i like that. keep writing!

on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:57 pm
Italy_Felixis GOLD, Walpole, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"For in dreams we enter a world that is entirely our own."

I really love your poem! It's short but I understand the message and it seems like it's written from the heart.

on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:39 pm
ThroughTheseEyes GOLD, Oconomowoc, Wisconsin
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and i would rather be absolutely ridiculous, then absolutely boring"

thanks :))

on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:38 pm
ThroughTheseEyes GOLD, Oconomowoc, Wisconsin
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and i would rather be absolutely ridiculous, then absolutely boring"

thank you :)

Privyet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:35 pm
Privyet BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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i'm liking the last two lines

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 9:33 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

This is really great. Like you said - short but meaningful. Through a long, sad story, I can relate to this kind of. Very nice and I would have to say the last lines were the best ones!


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