One Last Moment

January 22, 2012
Just one.
That's all I'm asking for.
One last moment,
before you're gone forever.
Because everybody has had their time to say goodbye.
Before I've even had the chance to say hello.

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JosikaNav said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 7:16 am
hey! amazing poem. it is short but sweet and i like that. keep writing!
ificandream said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 8:57 pm
I really love your poem! It's short but I understand the message and it seems like it's written from the heart.
Privyet said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 8:35 pm
i'm liking the last two lines
ThroughTheseEyes replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 8:39 pm
thanks :))
Shmelmo said...
Feb. 15, 2012 at 9:33 pm
This is really great. Like you said - short but meaningful. Through a long, sad story, I can relate to this kind of. Very nice and I would have to say the last lines were the best ones!
ThroughTheseEyes replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 8:38 pm
thank you :)
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