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The Tears Of Battle

Through the blood red sky the birds fly
underneath the blood red clouds they ride
to battle to death to save there land
for God provides all living things
and we the people of the land destroy all living things
for we are greedy
we are selfish



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Katierainbows said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 8:20 pm

love it sky

 

 
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 7:15 pm
This is a great poem. I would suggest proof-reading first(you did "there" instead of "their"). the topic was great and i lvoe the title. the phrase "blood red" really caught my attention. keep up the good work!
 
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