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I want you to hold me
Kiss me on the cheek, on the forehead
Let me lay on your chest and feel and hear your heart beat
Hold my hand
Kiss me like there's no tomorrow
Give me butterfly kisses
Give me me one single rose or a dozen
You don't have to give me expensive things all I want is you
Make me believe moments with you will never end
Be my best friend
Just hold me and love me like forever will never end
Let me run my finger thru your hair
Hug me when I'm sad, when I'm crying or mad
Just hold me and tell me everythings gonna be alright




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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 10:17 pm:
Great! I love this! Absolutely adorable! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
NLURHS replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:03 pm :
Thank you and I'm responding to this so late and yeah sure of course I will 
 
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hotshot said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:13 pm:
Very heartfelt. I understood the thongs you were trying to say. Very nice
 
NLURHS replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:46 pm :
thank you so much :D i think you meant things but i knew what you meant lol
 
hotshot replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:51 pm :
Yes I dd lol. My kindle jusylove auto correct
 
NLURHS replied...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 9:20 am :
lol yeah :D
 
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Firetip This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:10 pm:
Very nice. I like the word choice and the descriptions. It's a nice gentle poem. 5/5 ;)
 
NLURHS replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:15 pm :
thank you so much
 
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