midnight

February 2, 2012
By Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe


Midnight comes but once a day
and at that time the day does turn
frome the moon’s light
to the warm sun’s might
all at that time
named midnight.

The sun slacks off
at twelve o’clock
and waits until its six
before it rises, stretches, kicks
and spreds it’s yellow light.


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i hope you like it

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on Mar. 14 2012 at 7:42 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

It's really like the sun is waking up from a lazy day :)

on Feb. 24 2012 at 3:23 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

Haha, maybe i should go into the rapping industry.... teaching little girls and boys aboudays and nights... lol dont mind me, just brainstorming. Lol. Thanx for ur kind wirds, it means a lot. :) :)

Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:10 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

i like this part....

"the sun slacks off

at twelve 'o clock

and wait until its six

before its rises, stretches, kicks"

great rhythm....

looks like a line from a rap song.....

Don't mind me angel!


John Wallace said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:40 am
John Wallace, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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i thought it was really good, but it didnt have much closer. it seemed like you stopped right in the middle!!!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 12:10 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

I wrote this one night when I realized how even though midnight signifies the newest day, the sun doesnt rise until six. It was a sleepless night, ao I wrote this poem and another called sunrise, but this one is so much better

on Feb. 6 2012 at 12:07 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

Thank you xD haha, the sun does sound pretty lazy. Haha

on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:11 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
17 articles 1 photo 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

I like the personification w/ the sun and how u made it sound lazy^-^

on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:03 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me.

on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:55 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
6 articles 9 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

*reader very in the moment... whoops

on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:54 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
6 articles 9 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

Great poem, you make your writer very in the moment. Reading this was like being on my porch as midnight struck. Great job!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:56 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

thank you so much

on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:52 pm
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

This great I love it!! Don't stop writing!! :)

TapTap SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:47 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

PRETTTTY. keep writing! super deep! :)

on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:04 pm
Blacknblue_kissez BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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