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Look Through Different Eyes

Only if only you would look through different eyes
Quite with all the lies
She sees nothing in you

With her your personality is bleak
Your broken and weak
Not all love is sad
Not all love is bad.

Can’t you see your wasting your time,
Give me a try
I promise I won’t lie.


She doesn’t love you
Like I do
Give me a chance
Give me a try I’m your alibi.



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Writer38942849 said...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 6:00 pm:
love it :)
 
AlaskanGirl15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 9:54 pm :
Thank you. :)
 
AlaskanGirl15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 9:54 pm :
Thank you. :)
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 10:42 pm:
Nice job :)
 
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Lady.J.xoxo said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 2:08 pm:
Awesome :)
 
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LedZepGurl said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 8:52 pm:
this is awesome ^_^
 
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Camii said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 10:24 pm:
it's very good! i really liked the beginning ahah:)
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 8:40 pm:
So gggooooooood cute and pretty! luv it! i luv the structure as well. So any other work i can read? can u read mines?
 
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