I thought I found a Romeo: in English

January 30, 2012
By Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)


I thought I found a Romeo to be juliet to, but instead I found an untruthful one who broke my heart in two. The day that we first met I knew that something would go wrong, but for some reason I couldn’t let you go, my love for you was strong, I thought I found a Romeo the one to hold me tight, but I found not what I expected, our love just wasn’t right. I thought I found my Romeo, my feelings were too strong, I thought that I found Romeo, apparently, I thought wrong.
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The author's comments:
This is the english version.Yahhh! I wrote this about three years ago, the same day my boyfriend broke up with me... I know that sounds lonley but that's what it is!

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Kipitama GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 7:51 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Thanks for reminding me about that.I really need to write that..its about a fat squirel and a little boy...their adventures

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2012 at 8:48 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

omigosh sunshine!!!!!! i missed you soooo much i know we have not talked in forever but i have really been through a lot!!! and also... i lost my password for teenink......there is so  much i want to talk to you about so i really hope you are still on teenink!!! respond back pleeeaaassseee!!!

on Jun. 19 2012 at 3:05 pm
RashidaWrites GOLD, Somewhere, Iowa
17 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing Gold Can Stay" (Robert Frost), "For when dreams go. Life is a barren field. Frozen with snow" (Langston Hughes).

w00t! that was really great! I love the way you compared your love for this person to Romeo and Juliet. that makes a GREAT THEME. (: ohhh and what is the story you and your brother made called again?

on May. 15 2012 at 8:32 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Hey!:) How you been doing lately?

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:33 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Hey Sunshine!

on Mar. 21 2012 at 11:27 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thats completely ok, I understand because I am also very busy lately.

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 9:04 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

I'll get to them as soon as I can, been really busy lately.

 


on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:23 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thanks so much Toran!:) I do have some new ones published though if those are esier to look up..

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:07 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Ok, cool. I'll check them out!

on Feb. 23 2012 at 7:39 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

There are some new ones I just wrote, they are called "Sparks My Love", "Silver Moon", and "Holy Ground" :) If you would like to look and comment on those..these havent been published yet, but you can find them in the poetry part..

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 8:42 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Okey Dokey!

on Feb. 14 2012 at 8:15 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

All You have to do is click on my name and most of all of mine will be on there..The ones that are not on there though I will get those names too you cause unfortuantly im fixin to have to get off because I got to do some stuff...

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 1:48 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Sweeeeet! :D What are they called?

on Feb. 10 2012 at 9:20 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I absolutely do Toran:) You can check out my work if you'd like, I just put some new ones on here today.

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 9:02 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Do you write poems too? :)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 8:40 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Thanks so much.

on Feb. 9 2012 at 9:12 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow! This is so good! Great Job! Keep up the amazing work Toran!!

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 8:38 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

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