Glitter Rain

Have you forgotten?
Every passion,
Stolen from your arms,
Desperate innocence lost...









Vanished.











Disappearing into what's left of you,
Fading with this...
Oh, why is it?




...Our first beautiful but last numbing embrace?
Tell me it's a sick, deceiving moment...
A battle with your pale, beating heart...
Denial.

Cold.
Feeling...



No longer.~







Is this what we've become?
Never knowing...





~The glitter kissed my lips as the rain fell to comfort,
All that's left of me...
What will still remain...

Once you're erased?~





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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:33 am
Okay, like all your other work, this is just INCREDIBLE!! <3 i love it
 
SilverSun said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:30 pm
pretty. the title sucked me in right away cuz i love glitter. my favorite thing about ur poems is that I read them, and then read ur take on it. I feel like i need to know exactly wat ur writing about, so i can really understand why u wrote it and all. So preettyy
 
bloodroselove said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 7:40 pm
if i may completly smudge the english language..major goosebumpege haha i love it!
 
QN123 said...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 5:07 pm
This is amazing.
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 2:08 pm
Thank you so much:D I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!
 
song-writer26 said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 4:54 pm
This is amazing Written.Gave me goosebumps.I really love your work (:.Good job 5/5 stars !
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 4:55 pm
Thanks so much! ^^ Glad to give goosebumps! XD
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 7:00 pm
Beautiful work Written :)
 
-Kal- said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 4:12 pm
Now this one I like :) Five stars :)
 
thefamoustapper said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 3:37 pm
speechless amazement. So freaking beautiful/horrific (the good kind of horrific). 5/5 stars :).
 
EthanCalhoun said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 7:49 am
I really enjoyed reading this, your very talented, keep writing
 
AlaskaGrown said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:29 pm
Written, your writing is amazing and personally I like all the spacings it makes you use you imagination to think whats next and when you get to the next paragraph you can see if you were right.:)
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:32 pm
Thanks so much! I love it too. It makes it mysterious I think(:
 
recurring_resilience said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:33 pm
I'll be honest.. I didn't really get this one; the glitter metaphor seemed misplaced.. Maybe it's a girl thing? And the spacing fought against the poem.. Sorry to come across so negative but yeah..
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:36 pm
I used the glitter as a metaphor. It's referring back to something personal. I guess this is meant to be confusing.
 
Blue4indigo said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 6:49 pm
This is lovely, and so artfully written... The feeling of melancholy your words convey is so beautiful...
 
AllenStovall said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:25 pm
pretty talented i have to say
 
C.K.Snow said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:24 pm
This is a beautiful poem! I really loved it!
 
BrianaK said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:39 pm
I love the poem and it has great meaning to it
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:51 pm
Thanks so much!^*^
 
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