Glitter Rain

January 27, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Have you forgotten?
Every passion,
Stolen from your arms,
Desperate innocence lost...









Vanished.











Disappearing into what's left of you,
Fading with this...
Oh, why is it?




...Our first beautiful but last numbing embrace?
Tell me it's a sick, deceiving moment...
A battle with your pale, beating heart...
Denial.

Cold.
Feeling...



No longer.~







Is this what we've become?
Never knowing...





~The glitter kissed my lips as the rain fell to comfort,
All that's left of me...
What will still remain...

Once you're erased?~


The author's comments:
Believing that something will never change for the better....

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:33 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Okay, like all your other work, this is just INCREDIBLE!! <3 i love it

on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:30 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

pretty. the title sucked me in right away cuz i love glitter. my favorite thing about ur poems is that I read them, and then read ur take on it. I feel like i need to know exactly wat ur writing about, so i can really understand why u wrote it and all. So preettyy

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:40 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 33 comments
if i may completly smudge the english language..major goosebumpege haha i love it!

on Feb. 24 2012 at 2:08 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you so much:D I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!

QN123 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 5:07 pm
QN123 BRONZE, Birmingham, Other
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Education is our passport to the future, for tomorrow belongs to the people who prepare for it today.”

This is amazing.

on Feb. 9 2012 at 4:55 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much! ^^ Glad to give goosebumps! XD

on Feb. 9 2012 at 4:54 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
This is amazing Written.Gave me goosebumps.I really love your work (:.Good job 5/5 stars !

on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:00 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Beautiful work Written :)

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 4:12 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Now this one I like :) Five stars :)

TapTap SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 3:37 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

speechless amazement. So freaking beautiful/horrific (the good kind of horrific). 5/5 stars :).

on Feb. 4 2012 at 7:49 am
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
30 articles 0 photos 36 comments
I really enjoyed reading this, your very talented, keep writing

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:32 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much! I love it too. It makes it mysterious I think(:

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:29 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Written, your writing is amazing and personally I like all the spacings it makes you use you imagination to think whats next and when you get to the next paragraph you can see if you were right.:)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 7:36 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

I used the glitter as a metaphor. It's referring back to something personal. I guess this is meant to be confusing.

on Feb. 3 2012 at 7:33 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

I'll be honest.. I didn't really get this one; the glitter metaphor seemed misplaced.. Maybe it's a girl thing? And the spacing fought against the poem.. Sorry to come across so negative but yeah..

on Feb. 3 2012 at 6:49 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

This is lovely, and so artfully written... The feeling of melancholy your words convey is so beautiful...

on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:25 pm
AllenStovall PLATINUM, Port Lavaca, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"two things are infinate, the universe and human stupidity, and im still not sure about the universe"
albert einstein

pretty talented i have to say

on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:24 pm
C.K.Snow SILVER, Morden, Other
6 articles 10 photos 73 comments
This is a beautiful poem! I really loved it!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:51 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much!^*^

BrianaK BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:39 pm
BrianaK BRONZE, Waterford, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Keep Believing"

I love the poem and it has great meaning to it


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