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January 26, 2012
By dunguen1 GOLD, Louiisville, Kentucky
dunguen1 GOLD, Louiisville, Kentucky
11 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Find the light to help you out of the dark taht is never to far behind and cling to it because once you go into the unknown you will never be the same, if at all you will be different and different is good." -Unknown

When I saw you today you looked wonderful, which is horrible! And I wish we could change back the clock and go back to the better times. I wish we could love once more, and make that love shine. I wish and hope and pray, but there you are happy as can be and all this happened because you're without me. A smile you face to shove how well you take, heartbreak. The clothing that you wear, to show that you don't really care. The things you didn't say that made us depart far away.

The author's comments:
I wrote this because the day I saw my ex-boyfriend he looked so happy, so clean, so new. And I felt kinda Lonely ....

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Rosee SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2012 at 5:46 pm
Rosee SILVER, Oscoda, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, every one else is taken." -Oscar Wilde

Haha Its so true! But I'd wager he was pretending anyway..


I liked it a lot!!! 

on Feb. 20 2012 at 8:09 pm
rainbowgirl BRONZE, Ijamsville, Maryland
2 articles 3 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
My work has been modified to fit your brains. :)

love it, you really have talent, i like this one it captures the feel of heartbreak and mending.

-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 4:48 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
7 articles 4 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

I know the feeling... amazing writing as always!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 5:55 pm
Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Love the rhyming! beautiful message!


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