Love is Dead

January 19, 2012
By Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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Death keeps me away,
From loving you everyday,
I count the times,
I wish to reach out,
And turn your sad pout,
Into a foolish smile,
Then I remember,
Love is dead to me,
Cold like December,
Snow that falls lifelessly,
My heart is black,
Just like the moonless night,
There is no light,
I'm dead,
Love is nothing.



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on Jan. 26 2012 at 11:48 am
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks ^w^ really appreciated it even tho u read it at school lol

on Jan. 26 2012 at 10:10 am
truthlovehurts, North Vernon, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Falling in love is like jumping off a really tall building, your brain tells you its not a good idea, but your heart tells you, you can fly.

Amazing I LOVED IT HAHA :)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:11 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks lots :)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:06 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Really sad but really beautiful. Nice writing

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:42 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Oh, you're welcome!! ^*^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:40 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thankies lots ^^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:31 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

This is really awesome, simple yet extremely thought provoking in it's own way, I really enjoyed this piece^^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thankses so much ^w^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks, im not sure how i could make it any better really but ill keep tht in mind if i ever re-do it ^^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:12 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks, its sorta meant to be sad so i guess i succeeded ^^

on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:51 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Clever rhyming! I love it :)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:45 pm
pointblank SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Not a shred of evidence exists in favor of the idea that life is serious.

It is pretty good, but I think you can make "Love is dead to me stronger" more powerful it lacks the volume the other lines have- it is just to improve, I am not trying to diss you but help you

on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:43 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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Wow. That's powerfully....sad. :( But really good! Keep up the great work!


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