Your Poem

January 19, 2012
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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I read your poem of life
and every line, I fell
the other me released
and all that wrapped around me,
was a blanket of tears
sinking into your words
staining in your ink
then finally too much
I felt I had belief
sniffing in my joy
risking all my time
eventually I thought
I had to accept
your quotes
your words
your meaning,
of Life !


The author's comments:
A strong poetess encouraged this poem, this poem was almost to her, but it's for world. Expressing the way her poem effected me !

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AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:39 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
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Though she be but little, she is fierce!
-Shakespeare

This captures the feelings I feel when I read powerful poems! GREAT JOB!!!!

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 2:03 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Cool! And I'm looking forward to keeping it. ^_^

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 2:02 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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I really like this comment; thank you, Queen. :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 2:01 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Aww, really?! I'm glad that you could feel it, I actually feel like I did something. Thank you! :,D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 2:00 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you, best. :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:59 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks, and I shall. :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:59 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you, Poet! :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:58 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Sweet, thanks. :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:58 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks! :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:57 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Lol, I don't blame you. It's quite old. I write differently now. :/ Thanks anyway! :,D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:55 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Those are my favorites too, thank you so much for commenting. :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:55 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks! :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:54 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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I could say the same for this comment. :,)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:54 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you! And I will! :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:54 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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o_o I am? Sweet, thanks. :3

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:53 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Aww, thank you so much cookie. :,(

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:53 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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LOL, and thanks for this lovely comment. I suppose this is to you. ;)

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:48 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Aww, you're welcome. I'm glad for helping. ^_^

on Feb. 1 2014 at 4:14 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Like the poem, and the message I had seen in it. keep that good job ur doin' :D

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:21 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Its got meaning and emotion in it...and i although i cant fully grasp your feelings of reading the others poem i see it impacted you! Sometimes i feel this way when i read a poem that makes me stop and think. Niice.




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