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Your Poem

I read your poem of life
and every line, I fell
the other me released
and all that wrapped around me,
was a blanket of tears
sinking into your words
staining in your ink
then finally too much
I felt I had belief
sniffing in my joy
risking all my time
eventually I thought
I had to accept
your quotes
your words
your meaning,
of Life !



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elycavillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 4:14 pm:
Like the poem, and the message I had seen in it. keep that good job ur doin' :D
 
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scenesoccerqueen said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:21 pm:
Its got meaning and emotion in it...and i although i cant fully grasp your feelings of reading the others poem i see it impacted you! Sometimes i feel this way when i read a poem that makes me stop and think. Niice.
 
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OfMuchHappiness said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 12:55 pm:
It's well-written, but somehow I don't understand it. Good job, though!
 
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SeizeTheDay said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 11:34 am:
Wow! Really good!! Keep up the amazing work!
 
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starlight26 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 11:08 pm:
AHHHHH loved ittttttt!!!! You're so talenteddd
 
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JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:01 pm:
This is absolutely lovely =) keep writing! 5/5
 
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IntanThalia said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 3:58 am:
this is touching somehow
 
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willowtreegirl said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 12:03 am:
I love this poem. You did such an amazing job. thank you for inspiring me.
 
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stardreamer said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 10:34 am:
I love this poem especially the last line! :)
 
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KaylaMarie1996 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 9:39 am:
This is really good! I loved it!
 
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DumbSkoolBoy said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 9:09 am:
Amazing it really got to me
 
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NightGoddess17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:27 am:
amazing! great job! favorite lines "sinking into your words, staining in your ink." beautiful job!
 
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poetidea_myworld_22 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 6:23 am:
this is amazing i love it:)
 
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iamthebest said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 6:22 am:
Impressive poem
 
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Ms.Attitude06 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 6:10 am:
Ohkay.. now this was something different..!! I really liked it.. I mean, i felt it in my heart, so now I know that it's really awesome. Good Job! :D
 
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cookiestar said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 5:53 am:
Wow, this is touching, beautiful and emotional:). I loved it. Good job!
 
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mary_blue356This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 5:21 am:
Is this a poem you made for me? Lol just kidding. It speaks directly to me! I'm amazed! :D I re-read it over and over again... I'm touched. It is indeed from the heart!
 
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