A Caged Bird

January 19, 2012
By AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.


Deep in the corner of the room
Stands a cage with a bird within
Frolicking around, she silently screams
You may wonder what this means
No room, she cannot stretch her wings
And soon she will no longer sing
Where is her freedom, where has it been
Screaming now, for she is closed in
Her wings will bash and hit the wall
Broken and in pain this is her fall
If you never set free what you capture
In pain she will die shortly after
And this will be her last sad song
As you know what you did was wrong
Breathing in and out her last breath
Will you cry upon this sad death?


The author's comments:
This is about confinement, I don't get out as much and my freedom is on a leash, a limit

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on Feb. 20 2012 at 3:20 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

We all need our freedom and space. Without freedom we r nothing more then that of a prisoner. Thank you for painting that picture

on Feb. 10 2012 at 9:00 am
CourtCourt DIAMOND, Franklinville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
2 Corinthians 12:9
But he said to me, “My grace is sufficient for you, for my power is made perfect in weakness. ” Therefore I will boast all the more gladly about my weaknesses, so that Christ’s power may rest on me.

I loved this!! the rhyme helped push your mind to the next line even though it wasn't forced!! great Job:)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:53 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

beautiful rythme and a good point

Aiden PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:45 pm
Aiden PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
i am me, that's all I'll ever be.

beautiful! a thousand stars!!!

Regan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:45 pm
Regan PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
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there's no such thing as impossible for the word itself says im possible.

still love the rhymes! its not forced which makes it even better!! :D




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