Dreamless

January 13, 2012
Pictures play behind my eyes,
Eyes so weary...
Tugging me away...
Deeper...
A calming, gentle voice whispers words of beauty,
Peace...
...is it yours?
And I'm lost,
Drifting through violet air...
But what am I searching for?

A single, softly brushed kiss upon my lips,
And I know it's you...
But why are you hiding?
Waiting for me,
Somewhere inside my dreams...

Until I meet you there.~





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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:47 am
Beautiful. Just simply beautiful (:
 
bloodroselove said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 7:08 pm
love this peice and i love the way you write and get across your idea. im not sure theres just something about it that makes me wanna read it again awesome job! you have a true talent dont stop writing
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 7:17 pm
Thank you so much (:
 
EthanCalhoun said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:20 am
ok i was wrong, this might be one of my favorites of yours, your very talented and i really like reading your poetry
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:22 am
Thank you! (: Youre talented too!
 
AlaskaGrown said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:39 pm
Written I think this is one of my favorite ones so far... AMAZING
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:41 pm
Thanks so much!(:
 
Benjamin444 said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:34 pm
Wow. You have a very unique way of writing poems. i like it. It sure has a lot of feeling to it!!!
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 2:38 pm
Thank you! ^^ I'm not sure what makes it so unique, but I'm glad that it isn't the same stuff(: Glad that you enjoyed it!!
 
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 11:05 am
Aww I love this =) its so beautiful 5/5 stars!
 
Cut-out-ur-eyes said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 5:11 pm
second stanza is my favorite ^_^ LLLLLOOOOOVVVVEEEE it!
 
stardreamer replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 7:41 pm
This is so beautiful as all of ur poems are :)
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 3:00 pm
I really really like this one of yours! Nice job! =) 5/5
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 3:01 pm
Oh, and sorry it took me so long to comment...i was a little busier yesterday than i had expected to be o.O
 
chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:23 pm
the line about the soft brushed kiss reminds me of your other poem. I really like this though. 5/5 :D
 
Blue4indigo said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 11:08 am
I really like this one, too! I really love the dreamy, uncertain tone. It's like a beautiful dream...but then you wake up, and the magic is gone...
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 11:10 am
Thanks! I think now that was the affect I was going for! (:
 
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:54 pm
Reminds me of that girl I can always see in my dreams but can never remember when I wake up.
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 8:22 pm
Aww.... Why can't you ever remember her?
 
recurring_resilience replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 8:23 pm
It's just one of those things that always seems to happen..
 
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