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Dreamless
January 13, 2012
Pictures play behind my eyes,
Eyes so weary...
Tugging me away...
Deeper...
A calming, gentle voice whispers words of beauty,
Peace...
...is it yours?
And I'm lost,
Drifting through violet air...
But what am I searching for?
A single, softly brushed kiss upon my lips,
And I know it's you...
But why are you hiding?
Waiting for me,
Somewhere inside my dreams...
Until I meet you there.~
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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:47 am
Beautiful. Just simply beautiful (:
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:17 pm
Thank you so much (:
bloodroselove SILVER said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:08 pm
love this peice and i love the way you write and get across your idea. im not sure theres just something about it that makes me wanna read it again awesome job! you have a true talent dont stop writing
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 29 2012 at 2:38 pm
Thank you! ^^ I'm not sure what makes it so unique, but I'm glad that it isn't the same stuff(: Glad that you enjoyed it!!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:22 am
Thank you! (: Youre talented too!
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:20 am
ok i was wrong, this might be one of my favorites of yours, your very talented and i really like reading your poetry
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:41 pm
Thanks so much!(:
AlaskaGirl GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:39 pm
Written I think this is one of my favorite ones so far... AMAZING
Benjamin444 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:34 pm
Wow. You have a very unique way of writing poems. i like it. It sure has a lot of feeling to it!!!
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:05 am
Aww I love this =) its so beautiful 5/5 stars!
stardreamer SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:41 pm
This is so beautiful as all of ur poems are :)
cut-out-ur-eyes SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 5:11 pm
second stanza is my favorite ^_^ LLLLLOOOOOVVVVEEEE it!
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:01 pm
Oh, and sorry it took me so long to comment...i was a little busier yesterday than i had expected to be o.O
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:00 pm
I really really like this one of yours! Nice job! =) 5/5
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:23 pm
the line about the soft brushed kiss reminds me of your other poem. I really like this though. 5/5 :D
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:10 am
Thanks! I think now that was the affect I was going for! (:
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:08 am
I really like this one, too! I really love the dreamy, uncertain tone. It's like a beautiful dream...but then you wake up, and the magic is gone...
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:41 pm
I never remember the good dreams.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:28 pm
I remember all of my dreams...
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:23 pm
It's just one of those things that always seems to happen..
