January 8, 2012
By anthony ramirez BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
anthony ramirez BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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As I lay under the

large aging oak tree

I think. I think

about my life.

It hasn't been very

long, but many things

have happened to me

in my lifetime.

As I wonder about

how things could have

been, I just fade off

into a deep day dream.

I dream of a

perfect life with no

problems. Where nothing

can ever go wrong.

And I hope

that maybe one day

this perfect life will

be real to me.

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HaleyS. GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:41 am
HaleyS. GOLD, Byram, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If you drown, at least die knowing you were headed for the shore.
-Ray Bradbury

It's llike this poem was written for me. cuz ive had that feeling so many times. Really good job


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