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January 8, 2012
By Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein


Listen hear the trees whisper
Hear them speak to you
Listen to what they tell you
Now you must answer back
Listen and you will hear



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DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 10:36 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Kiry.....your a beast at poetry. Meaning your awesome at poetry. Nice use of personification! I really like this.

on Jul. 20 2012 at 11:24 am
EatSleepWrite95 GOLD, Dallastown, Pennsylvania
14 articles 12 photos 31 comments
Short and sweet! Makes you think.

on Jul. 20 2012 at 11:23 am
EatSleepWrite95 GOLD, Dallastown, Pennsylvania
14 articles 12 photos 31 comments
Very short and sweet! Makes u think.

on Jun. 10 2012 at 11:21 am
eliana_anastasia11 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don’t shine so others can see you. Shine so that, through you, others can see Him."
C.S.Lewis

I love that this poem is so short but yet so beautiful, I like that you make me think about it! Your a really good poet! 

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on Apr. 13 2012 at 8:23 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I like it :) it's cool that you can convey a message in such a short piece... Mine are usually long :P


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