Look what you’ve done

December 2, 2011
By DMan20 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
DMan20 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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An eye for an eye
But she will never fall for this guy
I change my looks and appearance
But there is some interference

Look what you’ve done

To the way she looks at this dude
Makes me want to be all crude
Makes me want to hate life
And stab myself with a knife

Look what you’ve done

But I can’t kill myself
Because I’m supposed to prove oneself
Myself that I can get her
But maybe this quest I should defer

Look what you’ve done

Once again I try to commune
But she says, “Never in a Blue Moon.”
At least one more time I tried
But without her I have died.

Look what you’ve done

The author's comments:
Feelings of being rejected.

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