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Evening

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Red light Green light, Streetlight night
Highway joyrides and nocturnal flights

Pitch dark Silent dark, marked up parks
Midnight strolls past bandits and sharks

Night shift Late shift, the unwelcomed gift
Endless boxes hes forced to lift

Bunk beds Lumpy beds, night time meds
Constant nightmares inside his head

Sunrise rise dew rise, rubbing dry eyes
Light for a moment til night fills the skies





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scenesoccerqueen said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 8:08 pm
Oh My Gosh!!! This is totally amazing!! I love it...i love the fact that it rhymes but the message and poem isn't drowned out! YOU GOT TALENT!!!
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 8:10 pm
I LOVE IT!! although i think you should pay more attention to commas and such...
 
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