Evening

January 12, 2012
By Nathan Bennett BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
Nathan Bennett BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Red light Green light, Streetlight night
Highway joyrides and nocturnal flights

Pitch dark Silent dark, marked up parks
Midnight strolls past bandits and sharks

Night shift Late shift, the unwelcomed gift
Endless boxes hes forced to lift

Bunk beds Lumpy beds, night time meds
Constant nightmares inside his head

Sunrise rise dew rise, rubbing dry eyes
Light for a moment til night fills the skies



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on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:10 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

I LOVE IT!! although i think you should pay more attention to commas and such...

on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:08 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Oh My Gosh!!! This is totally amazing!! I love it...i love the fact that it rhymes but the message and poem isn't drowned out! YOU GOT TALENT!!!


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