Leave the Door Open

January 3, 2012
By Anonymous

I'm glad, he says,
that you're working with
the door open.

He says, I don't like
to see you
closeted
away
like that.

He's so funny
when he doesn't

try.


The author's comments:
This is my attempt at a metaphor without being too smack-you-over-the-head about it. I hope I have succeeded.

This is pretty much taken word for word from a conversation with my father.

I would ask, please comment. Even if only to say "I liked it" or "I didn't like it." I appreciate it. Thank you for your time.

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