Thoughts

January 3, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Stolen away,
Beating... Beating...
Taking a breath,
Denial weeps for us.
Against my skin...
Hidden inside,
Are we really nothing?

Softly this heart longs...
For you...
What lies in your eyes?
Oh, my love...
Remember who I am,
So gently falling...
Captured.

Whisper again,
Are all your secrets screaming?
Begging...
Turn around,
Face the fear of Passion!
Silent...

Is it love that you're thinking of when we are quiet?
Falling...
Silent...
Again.


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~<3~

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:45 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Okay this one literally almost brought tears to my eyes... it's fantastic :)

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on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:30 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I love the dramatic feel your writing style has... it's really intense and addictive :)

on Mar. 10 2012 at 12:35 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

Oh my, this is amazing! I can personally relate more to this poem. I've always held the belief that silence contains the secrets in life. I feel like this poem when I'm with my best friend on the bus, we talk for a while but then he kind of abruptly stops and just remains silent as he stares out the window listening to his music. I always wonder what hes thinking. And I think you put it into words, thank you!

on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:46 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you, Chase (: And YES. That most definitely IS possible. To love someone who doesn't know you do.

on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:45 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you so much, Chloe ^^ You are so sweet and I love your comments^^

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:29 am
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
30 articles 0 photos 36 comments
Face the fear of Passion! 5/5

on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:21 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 142 comments
Wow. It littearly haunts me. I love your use of epithets. Wonderful. 5/5 stars and thsi one is going in my favs too.

on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:07 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

oooo i like this one! =) my favorite lines are "Whisper again, / Are all your secrets screaming?" and "Is it love that you're thinking of when we are quiet?" very good job, i think i'm putting this one on my favorites! 5/5

on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:16 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

I really like the stanza that says "Softly this heart longs... For you... What lies in your eyes? Oh, my love... Remember who I am, So gently falling... Captured." You just write so beautifully. Definitely 5/5

on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:03 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much! ^^ this one didn't seen so good to me at first, but I guess it is! (:

on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:58 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

This is my favorite of yours, so far! You say so much with so little words... its beautiful!

on Jan. 20 2012 at 7:48 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks(: so much

on Jan. 20 2012 at 7:31 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

this is realy good, like it.

on Jan. 20 2012 at 2:24 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

thamks so much! I appreciate that my work is appreciated ^^

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on Jan. 20 2012 at 5:35 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

"Falling... Silent... Again. " Beautiful, It's nice sad, questionable, and I like the graceful style !

on Jan. 19 2012 at 6:30 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war.
Palsm 114
John 3:17

Filled with passion!!!! AMAZING!!!! LOVE IT!!!!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:34 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much^^

on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:30 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
15 articles 4 photos 36 comments
This is so good. I feel like I am actually in a situation and this is happening to me! Love it 5/5 golden stars for you!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:14 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

WOW. JUST WOW. 5/5, awesome job!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:44 pm
Emma-Riley PLATINUM, No, Other
44 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take my hand i give it to you, now you own me all i am, you said you would never leave me, i believe you, i believe..."
-Flyleaf

good job! (: super awesome luv it


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