Tunnel Vision

December 23, 2011
By , tobyhanna, PA
You made me oblivious.
Tunnel vision, and all I see is you.
Magnetizing toward you with no will power to stop, no matter how much I want to.
My life flashed before me as I take that last kiss of the ending of my life as I know it.

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DoctorWhoLocked said...
Apr. 19, 2014 at 11:29 pm
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