The World Ends

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Here is where
The world ends
The river twists and bends
Till it cascades
Down a narrow ledge
Over the edge
Beyond oblivion
Raining into
Nowhere





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AlaskaFrost This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 4:46 pm
I agree with everyone who has commented on here. Again, I LOVE this poem, and I must say that I also love your style!!!
 
readaholic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 6:55 am
Cool :) Love the idea and the picture it puts in your head
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 11:11 am
Yeah, I agree with readaholic. This poem puts images into one's brain when reading it. I liked it--simple and direct.
 
Kimberlywrites said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 4:58 pm
I love the simplicity and descriptiveness of this poem. It's beautiful.
 
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