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Whispers

The whispers in the breeze
They always say your name


It blows through my soul
My heart about to burst
I knew it was you
Before you knew me
All because the whispers
In the breeze





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crimsonalchemist said...
Oct. 21, 2012 at 1:03 am
It is sweet and simple. like it <3
 
josika said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 8:11 am
hey! good work but it would have been better if it was longer and had a certain flow to it. overall ,good job!
 
MegaIBlahblah replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 3:10 pm
thanks for the feedback. i am really trying to get better :)
 
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