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Whispers

January 9, 2012
By MegaIBlahblah BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
MegaIBlahblah BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"InkNinja is not ninja."


The whispers in the breeze
They always say your name


It blows through my soul
My heart about to burst
I knew it was you
Before you knew me
All because the whispers
In the breeze



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on Oct. 21 2012 at 1:03 am
crimsonalchemist BRONZE, Cuttack, Other
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Favorite Quote:
1.UNITED WE STAND ,DIVIDED WE FALL
2.GOD IS SIMPLY AN INVENTION OF THOSE WHO HAVE NOBODY TO TURN TO (FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST BROTHERHOOD)
3.YOU COULD BE DECEIVED IF YOU TRUST TOO MUCH, BUT YOU WILL LIVE IN TORMENT IT YOU DONT TRUST ENOUGH (FRANK CRANE)

It is sweet and simple. like it <3

on Jan. 11 2012 at 3:10 pm
MegaIBlahblah BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"InkNinja is not ninja."

thanks for the feedback. i am really trying to get better :)

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:11 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! good work but it would have been better if it was longer and had a certain flow to it. overall ,good job!