Fallen

January 9, 2012
By ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Make noise while you can, after a while the world shuts you up."


As if you pushed me off a cliff, I've fallen in love.
Free falling at light speed.
More turbulent than the making of a milkshake.
I hurtle towards heartbreak and headache.
Some nights I stay awake and think of the day I will call you mine.
Give me my moment and I will shine.
A trophy like you is so divine.
No, I wouldn't die for you, but I'd live to make you smile.
I won't stop until we're walking down the aisle.

The author's comments:
I was in love...

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on May. 1 2013 at 1:55 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

There's always some gems lines in your poems. See what you're doing in these and implement them towards an entire project. I love the opening line, and the not wanting to die but live to make her smile. Good play-on-thoughts! Keep pursuing excellence, because you have the potential to reach it!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 4:09 pm
youngwriter10 SILVER, Redmond, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We've all heard that we have to learn from our mistakes, but I think it's more important to learn from successes. If you learn only from your mistakes, you are inclined to learn only errors."
-Norman Vincent Peale

Nice job very descriptive!!!

ElJay SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 10:23 pm
ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Make noise while you can, after a while the world shuts you up."

Guys thank you so much

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 9:40 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

Really liked it, it was very sweet, nice job! :D

on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:12 am
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
8 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Lovely! :)


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