Fallen

January 9, 2012
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As if you pushed me off a cliff, I've fallen in love.
Free falling at light speed.
More turbulent than the making of a milkshake.
I hurtle towards heartbreak and headache.
Some nights I stay awake and think of the day I will call you mine.
Give me my moment and I will shine.
A trophy like you is so divine.
No, I wouldn't die for you, but I'd live to make you smile.
I won't stop until we're walking down the aisle.





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LiraDaeris said...
May 1, 2013 at 1:55 am
There's always some gems lines in your poems. See what you're doing in these and implement them towards an entire project. I love the opening line, and the not wanting to die but live to make her smile. Good play-on-thoughts! Keep pursuing excellence, because you have the potential to reach it!
 
youngwriter10 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 4:09 pm
Nice job very descriptive!!!
 
Acastillo said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 9:40 pm
Really liked it, it was very sweet, nice job! :D
 
LG3onme replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 10:23 pm
Guys thank you so much
 
Wildflower30 said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 12:12 am
Lovely! :)
 
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