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Birthday Candles

The three decker cake stood before me on the table
All thirteen candles lit and waiting,

The wax melting and fading,
And the base plunged into the goodness of vanilla icing

As the spotlight birthday song continued to be sung.
Once it’s over, the candles seem to get brighter,

Smiles seem to get wider,
And the balloons seem to get lighter

As I stare at the round, sugary cake.
I can feel everybody’s eyes on me,
Beckoning my wish to come and blow out the candles,

So that the mocking cake can be devoured.
I can’t think of my wish or how to put it in words;
I feel pressured with all the family’s and camera’s eyes

Poised on me with expectance.
The icing covered cake sweats on the table,

And within seconds I make up my mind
I take a deep breath and blow 12 flaming candles out

And on the 13th I whisper softly,
'I blew out my birthday candles

And wished for you.'




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JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 4:20 pm:
**Please note: because of the new changes to the website as on 2/6/12, my poem's formatting is screwed up.
 
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Feb. 6, 2012 at 4:21 pm :
*of not on
 
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Xrisi said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:04 pm:
ohh i like it
 
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Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:05 pm :
thank you :)
 
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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 10:16 pm:
Due , this was amazing! I especially loved the last lines. They are so powerful! Keep up the fantastic-ness! 5 Stars :)
 
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Feb. 3, 2012 at 10:29 pm :
thank you so much! :D
 
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Allia822 said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:52 pm:
I really enjoyed this. It's a cool and new perspective.
 
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Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:57 pm :
thank you :)
 
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josika said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 11:16 am:
pretty poem! very well written. 5/5 from me
 
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Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:56 pm :
thanks! :D
 
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emru4534 said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:00 pm:
I really loved this...the ending was so cute!
 
JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:23 pm :
thanks! :D
 
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HopefullyTrue said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 5:46 pm:
i really liked this poem. It was very well written and gives many details that helped me enjoy it. I cant wait to read more of your work. would you mind reading my poem live and die i would really apprishate it. Thanks for putting up so an awsome poem.
 
JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 5:52 pm :
Thank you sooo much!! :D pleeease do read some more of my work-- i could really use the feedback! =) and nope, i dont mind :) i will read it asap...or right now :P
 
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willowtreegirl said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 6:30 pm:
I really enjoyed reading this! I had no idea where it was going at first and when I read the end I was pretty amazed by how you lead up to that. thanks for inspiring me.
 
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Feb. 1, 2012 at 6:47 pm :
thank you sooo much!! :D i am really glad i inspired someone =)
 
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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 6:51 pm:
Good poem, I especially like the ending, a little twist
 
JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 5:54 pm :
thanks! =)
 
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Skyeblu said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:38 pm:
Wonderful imagery! I could really picture the scene. It was a really good read:)
 
JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 5:54 pm :
thank you! :)
 
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alexiswillshine said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 4:59 pm:
I really like this! Can you rate and/or comment some of my work? thanks(: you are amazing! love this poem.
 
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