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A knife scraping inside of me
Hidden well so you can not see
This pain was never self inflicted
Every speck of hope evicted
You pulled the wool over my eyes
In order to hide all your lies
I only wish that I had known
That all my freedom had just flown
The second I replied to you
But it was exciting, something new
It had to be the words you said
That got you locked up in my head
I live for every promise made
Still waiting for fulfilment laid
It will get better so you say
Yet, soon continue your abrade
Though now as I admit the truth
I will always love you for you.




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WhittyKittyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 9:40 pm:
Wow, very strong and well written! Keep up the amazing work!
 
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shmam7624 said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 8:20 pm:
Thank you! :)
 
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leaf44This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 4:07 pm:
This is good. I like the idea and the poem flowed well - nice rhymes
 
GabriellaKittyShinesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 8:16 pm :
Hey Gabbie again, ur an amazin poet
 
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