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Stereotypical and conceited
So unfair and they don't even see it
Stuck behind a curtain
A world so dull and bleak
Unable to behold the potential
Plainly visible where they don't see.



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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2012 at 7:06 pm:

Great! Very powerful. You can truly feel your anger with your harsh language.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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shmam7624 said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 2:01 pm:
Thank you very much!
 
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maizyiscrazy said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 1:57 pm:
This is really good :) Awesome job expressing your feelings!
 
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WhittyKittyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 9:42 pm:
WOW! Short, strong, and just plain amazing! Love it!
 
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GabriellaKittyShines said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 8:14 pm:
Hey Its Gabbie :) this is great js
 
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