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when i saw you

December 25, 2011
By Agent__Maine BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
Agent__Maine BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
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you fell a long long way
,from which ive only seen glimpses,
because i know that this is the day
when i known ive seen haven.



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on Mar. 14 2012 at 9:37 pm
futurenovelista SILVER, Staatsburg, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"But I being poor have only my dreams...I place my dreams at your feet. Tread softly for you tread on my dreams." -Yeats

Liked it a lot, one soelling error, but totally enjoyed it! Keep Writing!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:36 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

I like this. I wanna hear more, you should extend it! 5/5 =) oooo just by reading it, i got an idea of my own!