when i saw you

you fell a long long way
,from which ive only seen glimpses,
because i know that this is the day
when i known ive seen haven.





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futurenovelist1577 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 9:37 pm
Liked it a lot, one soelling error, but totally enjoyed it! Keep Writing!
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 6:36 pm
I like this. I wanna hear more, you should extend it! 5/5 =) oooo just by reading it, i got an idea of my own!
 
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