Listen for my Echo

December 16, 2011
By writinggirl20 PLATINUM, Marksville, Louisiana
writinggirl20 PLATINUM, Marksville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
What I say only comes straight from my mind, i do not judge. (a quote by me)


Lost in your heart, I'm hoping you'll listen for my echo of the cream of help. I'm heartbroken, but you won't let me go. Your begging me to stay in love because you het it when I cry. You want me to love you, but you don't understand that you broke my heart. I want to be yours again, but it's too hard to forget the photo. Listen for my echo within your soul, your heart. I want you to know how bad you had made me feel.


The author's comments:
This is also based on my crush of 4 months on the 15th. and Thanx to people who comment my work! <3 (The photo I chose to accompany my work is a ffotball player because my crush is also one for my school.

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on Jan. 17 2012 at 3:34 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

I love this poem, i can totally relate to it, i think i know how you feel....great job, 5/5 without a doubt =)


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