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Did you really love me?
Before you had to go....
Did you really care?
Like you said you did.....
Were you truly going to wait?
I want(ed) you to....
But you're gone.
...
Silence
And burnt out remnants of shooting stars.



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Ashleyy1213 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 4:15 pm
its good.. make it longer though
 
shrutimallik said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 5:14 pm
niceeee....... short but meaningful....
 
Paris1997This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 5:16 pm
Thanks a lot. :)
 
LoveIsMyReligion said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 5:14 pm
this is really good i like it
 
Paris1997This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 5:15 pm
Thank you. :)
 
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