(Your) EYES

December 22, 2011
By izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous


I don’t remember ever staring into your
Eyes.
And I don’t remember the feeling of the whole me about to soar
Above those greenish skies.

The author's comments:
It wouldn't normally have the (Your) in the title, but it said:
Please enter a longer title (at least 5 characters in length). so now, on teenink, it is (Your) EYES.
{When when in the original poem: it would be just plain ol' EYES...). ENJOY.

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Acastillo GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 11:55 am
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

Awe so cute and sweet! I loved it lots! Keep writing!

on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:25 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

So short, so sweet. I love it!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:08 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

THANKS! so much!

BeingAnna GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:01 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty
-Marilyn Monroe

Wow that was lovely !


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