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With the rose comes the thorn
With the day comes the night
With the sun comes the rain
For the win, you must fight.

But where is my rose?
All I have is a thorn
Where is my light?
I am stuck without dawn
And where is my sun?
Will it ever come?
I have waited too long,
To be rid of this storm.



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GreenActressThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 5:08 pm
Wow, this is so good! I loved it! There's not a single thing that I would change! I really love the line: "For the win you must fight." Great work, you have talent!
 
Imy_Spray replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 1:57 pm
thanks so much :) very appreciated
 
Imy_Spray said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 3:39 pm
Please comment with your thoughts and I will read and comment for yours :)
 
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