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Im not your secret

December 7, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"


No one can take your place
Its not that easy for you to be erased
If that was the case
then its not about the race
I know it hurts bad
But your the best thing I ever had
So far ! Yes its true
Its about what you can or cannot do
No neither
Its about how you do
what you do
And I truly love you
for who you are
you were like my brand new car
But no I was suppose to be a secret
like don't tell nobody
Don't want my friends to know
Keep it on the low
Are you serious
Are you kidding me
I thought that we
could be
would be
Should have been
Together to the END !!


The author's comments:
My First love that didn't want his friends to know about me and he didn't tell them until they actually found out.

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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:21 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

thanks for the comment!

Andromeda GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:19 pm
Andromeda GOLD, Wichita Falls, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't have time for self-doubt. Self-doubt hinders your ability to write and all writers experience it anyway. You just need confidence in your own ability." -CarrieAnn13

I liked the first half better than the second. It was a sweet poem :)

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

thank you so much!

on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:09 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

 l liked this the emotions can really say that it hurt you alot.. i loved it infact