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your the death of me

December 12, 2011
By lilrain3 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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I feel the emotions of a child
Not having a mother
Lonely and scared
A baby meeting a stranger terrified
As if my sun was taken out of
My sky you cut me open
To bleed an left me to bleed
Alone without a simple goodbye now
I only cry for help –

© John O., New City, NY

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i wrote this to get over my first love.
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