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He Ran

November 15, 2011
By musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
8 articles 1 photo 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)


He did it for himself.
Him and no one else.
He didn’t want to be ruled by someone else.
He didn’t want to live his whole life stuck up on a dusty old shelf.
He needed freedom, he needed flight.
He needed to run.
He ran tonight



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on Jan. 5 2012 at 7:45 pm
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
8 articles 1 photo 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)

Thank you.

IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 3:34 pm
IzzyVT SILVER, N. Ferrisburg, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
“If the person you are talking to doesn't appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.”
― A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

I like your little rhyme at the end of the poem..."flight" and "tonight". It adds a different element to the poem that it might have lacked had it been a nonrhyming free verse...