Creativity

December 3, 2011
By Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy


"Roses are red
Violets are blue"
These are the words
That aren't anew

Originality's a gift
A square is a bore
Not hard at all
To let our minds soar

Bubbles and Rainbows
Haunt childhood dreams
To be like before
I'd give anything


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eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 8:11 am
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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No problem. Can't wait to see the new version (:

on Dec. 26 2011 at 11:30 pm
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
23 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

Thanks that means a lot.! I've been working on it, and I'll post the new version of it when I'm finished.

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 9:14 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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I like how you ironically started a poem entitled "Creativity" with a cliche poem. You also managed to use rhyme very well - it's difficult to find words that rhyme without sounding awkward in the poem. Additionally, it seemed to me that you were able to make a statement with the lack of rhyme in the last stanza to show that lack of rhyme is creative. I just got a bit confused with the last line; I think you could expand this poem to describe in more detail what the change is and how it is integral to the poem because it feels a little abrupt to me right now. Anyway, great job!


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