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"Roses are red
Violets are blue"
These are the words
That aren't anew

Originality's a gift
A square is a bore
Not hard at all
To let our minds soar

Bubbles and Rainbows
Haunt childhood dreams
To be like before
I'd give anything



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eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 9:14 pm
I like how you ironically started a poem entitled "Creativity" with a cliche poem. You also managed to use rhyme very well - it's difficult to find words that rhyme without sounding awkward in the poem. Additionally, it seemed to me that you were able to make a statement with the lack of rhyme in the last stanza to show that lack of rhyme is creative. I just got a bit confused with the last line; I think you could expand this poem to describe in more detail what the change is and how it is integ... (more »)
 
Villangel replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 11:30 pm
Thanks that means a lot.! I've been working on it, and I'll post the new version of it when I'm finished.
 
eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 8:11 am
No problem. Can't wait to see the new version (:
 
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