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"Roses are red
Violets are blue"
These are the words
That aren't anew

Originality's a gift
A square is a bore
Not hard at all
To let our minds soar

Bubbles and Rainbows
Haunt childhood dreams
To be like before
I'd give anything




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eliana924This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 9:14 pm:
I like how you ironically started a poem entitled "Creativity" with a cliche poem. You also managed to use rhyme very well - it's difficult to find words that rhyme without sounding awkward in the poem. Additionally, it seemed to me that you were able to make a statement with the lack of rhyme in the last stanza to show that lack of rhyme is creative. I just got a bit confused with the last line; I think you could expand this poem to describe in more detail what the change is and how it is integ... (more »)
 
VillangelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 11:30 pm :
Thanks that means a lot.! I've been working on it, and I'll post the new version of it when I'm finished.
 
eliana924This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 8:11 am :
No problem. Can't wait to see the new version (:
 
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