You Left

December 9, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe


When i was just a lil girl not even a year old

you walked out of my life never to be seen again

was it because of me that you left?

was it me just being born?



you'll never understand what i went thorough

everyone blamed it on me

i just wanna know the truth



Was it becuase of me that you left?

was it me just being born?

to tell you the truth my heart is ripped in two



know over 15 years have passed

and still no word from you

and to this day do i wonder

is it because of me that you left?

The author's comments:
this poem i wrote about my birth father

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on Jan. 20 2012 at 2:47 pm
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

anytime. It was very good.

on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:20 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you :)

on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:18 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you :)

on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:03 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

It had a great starting and an excellent ending

on Dec. 30 2011 at 8:22 am
sweetheart13 GOLD, Aberdeen, Other
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Favorite Quote:
it's not whats inside you it's what you do that defines you...
True love doesn't have a Happy ending... True love doesn't have a ending...

I reallyy liked this poem although it was saddening. I am so sorryy :( but the poem was amazing it really brought emotion into what I was reading and I could imagine what you where feeling at the time.




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