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You Left

When i was just a lil girl not even a year old

you walked out of my life never to be seen again

was it because of me that you left?

was it me just being born?



you'll never understand what i went thorough

everyone blamed it on me

i just wanna know the truth



Was it becuase of me that you left?

was it me just being born?

to tell you the truth my heart is ripped in two



know over 15 years have passed

and still no word from you

and to this day do i wonder

is it because of me that you left?





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iamthebest said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 10:03 am
It had a great starting and an excellent ending
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 10:20 am
thank you :)
 
iamthebest replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 2:47 pm
anytime. It was very good.
 
sweetheart13 said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 8:22 am
I reallyy liked this poem although it was saddening. I am so sorryy :( but the poem was amazing it really brought emotion into what I was reading and I could imagine what you where feeling at the time.
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 10:18 am
thank you :)
 
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