why don't you see me

November 9, 2011
By tinytory SILVER, Merrimack, New Hampshire
tinytory SILVER, Merrimack, New Hampshire
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.


I try to get your attention
You don’t see me
I whisper your name
You don’t see me
I yell to you
You don’t see me
Why don’t you see me?
Am I invisible?
Am I unseen?
Am I un real?
AM I DEAD?
Dead I am
Dead I am to you



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on Jan. 2 2012 at 6:15 pm
tinytory SILVER, Merrimack, New Hampshire
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.

thanks this is my favorite of my poemsss

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:53 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

Wow... Short but strong and rippling with emotion. I can relate to the feelings in this poem. Great job! 5/5


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