why don't you see me

November 9, 2011
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I try to get your attention
You don’t see me
I whisper your name
You don’t see me
I yell to you
You don’t see me
Why don’t you see me?
Am I invisible?
Am I unseen?
Am I un real?
Dead I am
Dead I am to you

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WhittyKitty This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 11:53 pm
Wow... Short but strong and rippling with emotion. I can relate to the feelings in this poem. Great job! 5/5
tinytory replied...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 6:15 pm
thanks this is my favorite of my poemsss
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