Why do you hate me?

December 6, 2011
By Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
5 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Why must you bring pain to me?
Why must you humiliate me,
especially in front of my friends?
Why do you do these things to me?
What is the significance of being a bully?
Does this bring joy to you?
Why do you call me names?
Why do you state untrue facts about me?
Why do you make fun of my family?
Why?
Why do you hate me?
What did I ever do to you?
Please.
Stop.
I don't like being hurt.
School is supposed to be a place to feel safe.
So, why don't I?

The author's comments:
This is about the times when I was verbally humiliated at school.

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on Dec. 16 2013 at 1:55 pm
LegendaryTrash BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Stand up and walk. Move forward. You have two beautiful legs, don't you? You don't need to rely on anything." - Edward Elric

wow this is exactly how i felt when i was in kindergarden 1st grade and all the way to 5th grade

on Dec. 22 2011 at 8:59 am
SiMpLyUniQUe BRONZE, Port Of Spain, Other
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Favorite Quote:
you look at me with your eyes wide closed

i loved this poem, i could actually relate to it!!! great job (:

on Dec. 21 2011 at 7:59 am
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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i really like this!! however i have one contradiction... I never thought school was safe... Other then that, AMAZING job!!!!

Vellari BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 7:36 am
Vellari BRONZE, Lake Villa, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"It is impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all, in which case you have failed by default." -J. K. Rowling

Wonderful. I like it a lot, lots of feeling. :)

on Dec. 15 2011 at 12:56 pm
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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I just wanted to thank all of you for your positive, helpful feedback.  I think it will help me in more pieces of writing that are soon to (hopefully) be published!!  :)

on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:51 pm
simbaspride SILVER, Keene, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original, don't die a copy" John Mason

I like it a lot. It's a really clear message that a  lot of people can relate to. 

keep up the good work!


on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:33 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

very terriffic

on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:30 am
SnehaChatterjee PLATINUM, Kolkata, West Bengal, India, Other
45 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in the woods and I,
I took the one less travelled by,
And that has made all the difference

Hi... your poem is very heart teaching... seems like we've been treated the same way by the world.. never lose hope keep writing!!! I would be honoured if you can give me your opinion about my poetry :)

on Dec. 13 2011 at 1:39 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

very good! :)

please check out my work whenever you can. It'll mean a lot to me. Thank you! :)


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on Dec. 13 2011 at 1:05 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.." <3
"What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger!"- My Coach
"Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future."

wow.. this is really good!

on Dec. 13 2011 at 12:08 pm
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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What could I have rephrased?

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:52 am
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

Nice job. I think you could have re-phrased a few things to make the poem a bit stronger in the message you were trying to get across, but overall, I loved it. Keep writing!

Please check out some of my work if you get a spare minute. Feedback always means a lot to me.


on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:34 am
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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ndgood poem, epic ending, makes me want more

on Dec. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
Ayushi_austen BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I love my past. I love my present. I’m not ashamed of what I’ve had, and I’m not sad because I have it no longer...

this is great gal!!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 1:26 pm
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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Thanks!!!!!(:

on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:54 am
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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Thank you so much!!! :)

 


Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:50 am
Lovejuice GOLD,
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If this is one of your first pieces of writing, I can't wait to see what the rest will look like!

No grammar or spelling errors of any kind, a clear message with just as clear wording, and a no nonsense tone to it.

You have a good poem here GoGreenGirl!


on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:25 am
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

Aww...I really like it. I can feel your emotions. Keep writing you show a lot of potential!!!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 8:17 am
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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This is my first piece of writing.  Please rate!!! :)


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