Jealousy

November 7, 2011
By illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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Oh I know you so well.
Your their when I see my friends boyfriend
Your their when I look at my ex's love
you cloud my vision, you muddle my brain.
You contaminate every inch of my space.
You make it hard to breathe
You give me words to stifle
oh, how I detest you jealousy.



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illusions GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 3:22 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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no problem

on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:10 pm
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

you already commented on a lot of my pieces so thanks :)

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 3:14 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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thank you any thing of yours you want me to check out?

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 3:13 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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thank you for your comments

on Feb. 20 2012 at 2:09 pm
Scribbler-of-Dreams PLATINUM, Brandon, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love isn't everything we want, but it's everything we need....

My favorite so far...

on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:36 pm
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
26 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

Great descriptions. A bit of a surprise at the end. Even with the title, I did not expect that. Excellent job :)

on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:43 am
amandaleigh2014 BRONZE, Greene, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real. Ghosts are real, too. They live inside of us, and sometimes, they win." -Stephen King

I'd watch out for spelling mistakes.. Good otherwise.

on Dec. 20 2011 at 3:02 pm
SpringMoon98 GOLD, Ava, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone wants to change the world, but do they ever stop to think about changing themselves?"
Leo Tolstoy

I like this one! I like the examples and descriptiveness.

on Dec. 14 2011 at 1:31 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

lol i love it

 

 



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