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Oh I know you so well.
Your their when I see my friends boyfriend
Your their when I look at my ex's love
you cloud my vision, you muddle my brain.
You contaminate every inch of my space.
You make it hard to breathe
You give me words to stifle
oh, how I detest you jealousy.



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PoetryAngel14 said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:36 pm
Great descriptions. A bit of a surprise at the end. Even with the title, I did not expect that. Excellent job :)
 
illusions replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:14 pm
thank you any thing of yours you want me to check out?
 
PoetryAngel14 replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 8:10 pm
you already commented on a lot of my pieces so thanks :)
 
illusions replied...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 3:22 pm
no problem
 
amandaleigh2014 said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 10:43 am
I'd watch out for spelling mistakes.. Good otherwise.
 
SpringMoon98 said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 3:02 pm
I like this one! I like the examples and descriptiveness.
 
Goddess said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 1:31 pm

lol i love it

 

 

 
Iamhere4u This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 2:09 pm
My favorite so far...
 
illusions replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:13 pm
thank you for your comments
 
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