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Barbie

I'm not your toy,
I'm not your Barbie,
you can't dress me up,
and put me in your doll house,
make do what you want,
cause i am human,
and not made of plastic.
Believe if it or not,
I have feelings,
that may not be what you want them to be.
Believe it or not,
I have a brain under my hair,
just not an empty space,
for you to fill with thoughts.
Believe it or not,
I am living,
i am not a way for you to play pretend,
anymore.
I know in the past,
I might have been your Barbie,
I let you dress me,
I let you think for me,
I was your toy,
but that game is over,
except that its over,
because I am human.
No longer your Barbie,
no longer your toy,
I am human,
and I have feelings,
and this game is over.
I'm not your toy,
I'm not your barbie,
you can't dress me up,
and put me in your doll house,
make do what you want,
cause i am human,
and not made of plastic.



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izyfizy said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 7:42 pm:
OOOO!!! izyfizy likee! <3333 great job Wonder!!!! <33333333333
 
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pinkowlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 3:09 pm:
i love this wonder meat! awesome use of images, i could see what you were writing. i love the flow! <3
 
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KWeiberg321 said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 1:37 pm:
Wow. This reminds me a lot of how my relationship used to be. It really describes how those type of relationships are. It's amazing. (: I love the style. Good job.
 
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xEmmiiixThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:29 pm:
This poem reminds me of abusive relationships....something i have much expirience with....what a great poem with beautiful emotion. well done!!!
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 12:39 am :
WOW! This is seriously SO amazing. I can SO relate to this in SO many ways. I really LOVE this poem, SO much. Sorry for all the SO'S lol, but I had to use them. :)) This poem is pure brilliance. You did an absolutely amazing job. 5/5 from me. GREAT job on connecting/relating to your readers. VERY impressive. :)))))))))
 
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Mrs.Darcy said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 3:21 pm:

*wipes a tear* you go girl...

 

This poem is amazing. You are very talented.

 
reader123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 3:23 pm :
beatuiful :)
 
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