TRAPPED BY LOVE

December 1, 2011
By Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”


his charm, his being
draws me in
i fall under his spell
unable to break free

sparkling blue eyes
luring me in
my heart beats rapidly
any minute ready to burst

lava running through my veins
setting me on fire
a moth drawn to a flame
sweet beauty, hard to resist

fallen under the spell
no way of getting out
I"m trapped within
with no way out



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on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:09 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

Wow! this piece is really beautiful!! I especially love the stanza: lava running through my veins setting me on fire a moth drawn to a flame sweet beauty, hard to resist great job!!

on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:50 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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ur titles just draw me in:)loved the metaphoric lines "lava running through my veins" and so forth. very intriguing choice of words. i know what blue sparkling eyed boy:(moved from my life though

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:17 pm
Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
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love it! love the picture that goes with it


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