TRAPPED BY LOVE

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his charm, his being
draws me in
i fall under his spell
unable to break free

sparkling blue eyes
luring me in
my heart beats rapidly
any minute ready to burst

lava running through my veins
setting me on fire
a moth drawn to a flame
sweet beauty, hard to resist

fallen under the spell
no way of getting out
I"m trapped within
with no way out





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dontforget This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 10:09 am
Wow! this piece is really beautiful!! I especially love the stanza: lava running through my veins setting me on fire a moth drawn to a flame sweet beauty, hard to resist great job!!
 
applesauceHater said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 11:50 pm
ur titles just draw me in:)loved the metaphoric lines "lava running through my veins" and so forth. very intriguing choice of words. i know what blue sparkling eyed boy:(moved from my life though
 
Nicole__G said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:17 pm
love it! love the picture that goes with it
 
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