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I Am Kacy

November 9, 2011
By KacyLee1 BRONZE, Peralta, New Mexico
KacyLee1 BRONZE, Peralta, New Mexico
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I am.. Funny and nice
I wonder.. Where I'll be in 10 years
I hear.. Music
I see.. People
I want.. To be smart
I am.. Funny and nice
I pretend.. To like school
I feel.. Happy
I touch.. The stars
I worry.. Why people act so weird
I cry.. When people are mean
I am.. Funny and nice
I understand.. That everyone is going to hurt you
I say.. I love you
I dream.. That one day I'll be rich
I try.. To succeed
I hope.. That everyone can be happy
I am.. Funny and nice


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Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 11:05 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

You did a good job on this. I liked reading it. I think maybe a bit of an improvement would be to have more of a build up (climax) to the end to give it more of a feeling of ending.

Please take a look at some of my work. :)