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Heartache...

The emotions spilling out,
They've been discovered.
Tears filling up my eyes,
and overwhelming my soul,
for there is a sad story to be told.
Those days I just need to face,
and realize my fate,
That I shall never be with him.
If only someone would know what i think,
And if only they knew how much sadness it brings,
Or how much my heart aches everyday.
They'd pity me and say "Poor girl, she'll never get her way".
And I'll sit and I'll cry,
Hiding my feelings inside,
Just what i do, every time.



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artmantist said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:37 pm:
very emotional, i like that, wanna check mine out too?
 
alicecullen replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:38 pm :
thanks.. no problem:)
 
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brokenangel14 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 2:57 pm:
I know the feeling. Itt's never good
 
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FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 2:55 pm:
Can't put it better than Wonderment did.  Nice job...
 
alicecullen replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:40 pm :
thanks... means a lot!
 
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Wonderment said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 2:35 pm:
I like this. The emoutional undertones are strong and its very relatable.
 
alicecullen replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:40 pm :
thanks so much :)
 
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Risible said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 8:17 pm:
great expression of emotion! I can totally relate to what you're describing. It seems like in this case you're talking about a guy you will never be able to be with, correct? But the emotion can be applied to all sorts of situations, which makes it very relatable. Would you check out my poem Here, I Can Barely Think? I'd love to get your feedback. 
 
alicecullen replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:28 pm :
yes, that is correct:) i will definitly check it out!
 
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Becca17 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 8:15 pm:
beautifully written. brings tears because i can relate.
 
alicecullen replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:27 pm :
aww thanks you soo much! :')
 
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kwoodman821 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:32 pm:
this is amazing! i can relate to it, and i like that about writing! Its so heart-wrenching. Great job! 
 
alicecullen replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:27 pm :
thanks so much :)
 
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