I Think, Well I Know

November 26, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"


Yes I gotta say that I've been Physically
And mentally
hurt and neglected
Sometimes I feel like a car that has been purposely reacted
And I feel bad when I think about suicide
And how I still look you in the eyes
And act like everything is OK
But its not
I'm suicidal
And all the way
You
I
We look at each other like everything is OK
But its not
I'm not going to do it thou
I want to go to heaven
That's the only reason
Don't want to rot in hell
Nor wanna be a burden here on Earth
.....



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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:58 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

yea i know i spelled it wrong sorry!!

on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:32 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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oh you meant WRECKED! :0

 


Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:47 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

i had said i feel like a car.... that has been rected purposly. like in a car accident. i think i know what i meant. but thanks

on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:20 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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Confusing at times.  e.g. "Sometimes I feel like a car that has been purposely reacted."  But with some editing it would be quite strong!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:35 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

Thank you... That means alot.

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:33 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

thank u... i tryed to write from the heart.

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:31 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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GREAT STUFF >>>> You are an Exemplary !!!!

 


Chrysaora GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:28 pm
Chrysaora GOLD, Providence Forge, Virginia
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this is really deep and honest...I like it!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 5:31 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

Thank you so much

on Dec. 1 2011 at 5:20 pm
Truetothering_24 GOLD, Queens, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Trust Nobody

so simple but so much meaning loveddddd it

Zahria SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:43 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

I will most definetly return the favor and Thank you for Commenting.

Matice BRONZE said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:37 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

A very strong poem. You did a good job. I liked the choppiness of it, but it wasn't TOO choppy. You had a nice flow.

If you have time, I'd love for you to take a look at some of my work and maybe return the favor? :)


Zahria SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:19 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

Thanks alot

Alison4355 said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:02 pm
Alison4355, Montgomery, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
You know whats right and wrong

Hello my name is Alison and I love this poem it is so.... whats the word Unique and very honest. If this is a true story then IM SORRY But this is a cool poem to me.

Zahria SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:20 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

Thank you for the tip ill keep that in mind next time. And Thank you in general. Part of it true

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:46 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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This has room for improvement -- for example saying "wanna" is too conversational in comparison to the rest of the poem.

In general, I do like it, and I'm curious if this is truthful or imagined.


on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:45 pm
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

If this is a real situation for you, i'm so sorry. But either way it's an amazing poem.


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