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I am a chilled flower, surrounded
By a sea of snow.
A deer dodging blind bullets.
The hunter, who hunts
Ducks.
I am a twirling camel.
An artist
Sketching on diamonds.
The Clay that creators mold.
I am the bird freed from chains
Into thin air.



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Quirkily said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:25 pm
wow. this is beautiful. i got very crisp sense of the images. well done.
 
Labradorian This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:20 pm
The imagery in this is superb! It remindes me of an 'I am' poem but the phrasing is so much better. Short and spactacular.
 
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