Into thin air

November 26, 2011
By sailingseashells BRONZE, Brookline, Massachusetts
sailingseashells BRONZE, Brookline, Massachusetts
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I am a chilled flower, surrounded
By a sea of snow.
A deer dodging blind bullets.
The hunter, who hunts
I am a twirling camel.
An artist
Sketching on diamonds.
The Clay that creators mold.
I am the bird freed from chains
Into thin air.

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on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:25 pm
sophza PLATINUM, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it." ~Ferris Bueller

wow. this is beautiful. i got very crisp sense of the images. well done.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:20 pm
Labradorian PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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The imagery in this is superb! It remindes me of an 'I am' poem but the phrasing is so much better. Short and spactacular.


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