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River of tears :'(

November 8, 2011
By Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
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if you dont like me get over it


She sits alone with no one around huddled up in a corner all alone with a river of tears pouring down.
she doesn't know what to do anymore.
he completely destroyed her.
Does he really love her? she doesn't know for sure.
nothings clear anymore.
isn't love supposed to be the way it is in folk lore?
all happy and full of joy?
how could she have been so koy?
how could she have been so naive?
but she was easy to deceive.
she fell for all his lies.
if only she had opened her eyes.
maybe she would have seen.
but she wasn't that keen.
she couldn't see what was in front of her.
now she sits here alone in her corner shedding her tears of sorrow as she remembers hes gone.
he doesn't love her any more... he walked away



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Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:42 pm
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

thank you :) its one of my favorites that i did. you should check out my other work you would probably like it to

Brie555 said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:45 pm
LOVE THE POEMMM!! :D I cryed when I read this; its beutiful <3