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BitterSweet

You tell me
that leaving
is
Bittersweet

I can feel the weight of
those words as they
Hit
my chest

Then you ask me, do I

understand?

I do

I understand;
If, indeed, after
all is said and done

Bittersweet
is simply another word for
horridly,
utterly,
heart-
wrenchingly...

Painful.




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heather_marie said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
I love it! good imagery if u don't mind i would like to read this infront of my poetry club.
 
Lilacs_Smell_WonnerfulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:39 pm :

Haha, go ahead, though you might want to tell them it was written by Katherine, not Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful. XD

-Lilac/Katherine

 
Lilacs_Smell_WonnerfulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:41 pm :

Oh, and thanks. :) I am glad you liked it.

-Lilac

 
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KCayla said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 6:08 am:
Nice :). This was well written. 
 
Lilacs_Smell_WonnerfulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:09 am :

Thank you so much! :)

-Lilac

 
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tweetiebruce said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 1:06 am:
that is really well done. If you get  chance cud you check out my work...? 
 
Lilacs_Smell_WonnerfulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:08 am :

Thank you so much, and I will definitely check out your work. :)

-Lilac

 
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