Sad Little Liar

November 21, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


You lie.
Why do you act?
Everyday you put a smile on your face.
Only I know it's not true
You hurt
Your hot tears
burn holes in your cheeks
where they fall and settle
on what once was a smile.
The taste of tears
has stained your tongue.
New tears will come
with new reasons to cry.
In your head
is blood and death and everything sad
when all you really want
is a reason to be happy.



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on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:34 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thx mattsi :)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:21 pm
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
15 articles 0 photos 57 comments

I loved the line your hot tears burn holes in your cheeks

great writing! 


on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:50 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

aww thx pinky :)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:16 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

aw, i love this. i love it so much! makes me thinka lot! good flow! <3

LivingMYLife said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:51 pm
thank you :) its about my best friend whose hurting when he shouldnt be

LivingMYLife said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:51 pm
thank you :) its about my best friend whose hurting when he doesnt have to.

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:45 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 132 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Wow, you've used language really well here! The opening was really, really good.


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