Sad Little Liar

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You lie.
Why do you act?
Everyday you put a smile on your face.
Only I know it's not true
You hurt
Your hot tears
burn holes in your cheeks
where they fall and settle
on what once was a smile.
The taste of tears
has stained your tongue.
New tears will come
with new reasons to cry.
In your head
is blood and death and everything sad
when all you really want
is a reason to be happy.





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mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:21 pm

I loved the line your hot tears burn holes in your cheeks

great writing! 

 
BeyondTheBrooke replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:34 pm
thx mattsi :)
 
pinkowl said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 3:16 pm
aw, i love this. i love it so much! makes me thinka lot! good flow! <3
 
BeyondTheBrooke replied...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 4:50 pm
aww thx pinky :)
 
AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:45 pm
Wow, you've used language really well here! The opening was really, really good.
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:51 pm
thank you :) its about my best friend whose hurting when he doesnt have to.
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:51 pm
thank you :) its about my best friend whose hurting when he shouldnt be
 
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